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Amazing writing! - 9th Oct 2012

Year 4 have produced some wonderful writing on red kites

Red kite

 

He is swooping through the air like a paper  glider.

He is gliding through the sky watching his prey.

 

 

He is staring into thin air.

His gaze is stuck on his prey.

His eyes are like the sun blazing down on earth.

 

His wings are like a double v when he is diving .

His eyes fixed on his moving prey.
His feet are like a planes undercarriage.

He is taking off from his green table after his meal.

 

 

Tom

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